What did you use to make this? I recommend something like fraps or OBS to record, bandicam is gross and that water mark is gross

You didn't list a program so I'm going to hope it's either After Effects or Sony Vegas. Cut the clip before the start of the replay. I see you paused and restarted it-which changed the camera, that shouldn't be seen. Your camera work has no real focus on the music, besides maybe the cut but that just seems slapped in there.

With such low tempo music like this I think you shouldn't cold start with a replay, the music is really annoying and uninteresting, at least from what you put in there, this song sounds like it'd be a product of a 12 year old and his minecraft let's play made in windows movie maker.

Why are you holding the colors hostage

also your tori is gross, /lp 0 f
or something