the transition where you can see the moon/sun is a bit choppy. i can see exactly where you change clips because it wasn't executed that well. (look between 0:05-0:06, you can see it suddenly change positions). perhaps you should speed up the transition so its less noticeable

its good to vary your camera distance, but i think you made too many close passes with the lasy replay

the transition to the next song wasnt really done well

the tempo sped up but i dont think your replays did