Uhh...


Try not to use songs 'n' shit that were already used, ay?

Anyways, your velo was meh, it was without meaning imo.

Try to add some glowing too.

Some subtle screen rotation is cool too.

Work on some CC. The darkish shader really won't work in your favor.

Overall, work on those things, and you shouldn't use songs that are already edited to.

Also, that video was also originally named Unravel. :/