Hi Rick.
You need to work on your keyframing, it's too far away from the tori and you don't get enough angles on the replays, it just looks like a replay showcase.
The mirror effect at 0:08 was really unneeded and really unnoticeable, took me watching it twice to find it.
You need to speed up your transitions, don't let there be too much empty space, transitions need to be quick and to the point, however you decide to make use of said transitions.
I don't know what you tried to do with your twixtor, but it looks like you synced everything as little as possible, It didn't look like you synced the twixtor to the bass of the song, try doing that next time, it won't make it look as empty.
Your cc is weird, just gives a slight orange/red-ish tint on the screen, try playing around with Levels, Grad Exposure, Contrast, and Saturation plus whatever else you think looks good.
Try adding new effects into your edits, they're all plain from how many I've seen in the past. Just try something new, every edit is the same, be different hombre.
Overall, there's nothing that defines your style yet, just experiment with new things and don't be afraid to do something nobody has done before. I'm confident that you'll surpass me again.
Good luck amigo.