@Eiky: Nice trick but I wouldn't say it's perfect. Your moves are too sudden and give it an offputting look. Try to keep your movements fluid. It's a No.
@Nulu: I'm saying no to the webster. The run looked a bit floppy and I personally like the current example more.
Donut boy is nice but it's not a donut boy. if anything it's a d-leg cork. Try to think of the donut boy as a spin and not a twist. Feets should always point to the ground. Setup is nice though. I'd love to see more from it.