I like the decisions you made as far as the path of parkour (the route you took was entertaining), I like the moves you did, but i'd like to see them a little more cleaner and controlled on some sections, alot of it looked like you knew what you wanted to do but the "doing" it part just got a little messy in some of the parts.

Like in some parts of the running your legs would flail out like you almost fell

some of the tricking was a little messy and randomly thrown in (for a parkour replay).

So in parkour try to stay focused on goals, getting from A to B cleanly and controlled and if you're going to stop do anything like tricking, make sure it's either well done or contributes well to the replay.