same name, same song, not as good
I think this video shows good flow and velo with the song, if you directly took the song and stuff from here then I'd understand why your velo looks so much like you're undecided on what you actually want to do.
Also, this fps is in 60fps, it looks like 60fps. Yours is rendered in 60fps, but it is very choppy, can you not record at a steady 60?

Toris are ugly(groundtextures? really?,) colours change too much and don't really fit

When I look at this I see so many things that you just threw in because you wanted to but had no care to actually make work or look good
http://i.imgur.com/KRWQHMm.png
are there 2 of dafe layered on purpose? it looks really trashy and the effect had no flow and it just looked like you were experimenting. Experimenting is good, but I don't think its wise to not say this was a scrap or test or something, because this looks like a rough draft of an edit.

ep logo and your logo are very cluttered and are too detailed, especially for a game where its just circles and sticks

I'll most likely edit this post later to go more indepth with what you're doing wrong/right, but you made this video days after your last one and I don't think it's that big a deal if you just wanna pump out videos

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