Ok to start off all you did was cut up some clips keyframe
record and put some loud music.
I am not saying your video has to be full of effects and crazy shit
and although the overall video is satisfying and nice to watch
it still needs lots of work to become an 8/10 or a 10/10 video.
I have a few suggestions that are opinionated but I think most people
can agree with and agree it will make the video better.
First off your keyframing was good but there were some shots
that I couldn't even see what the tori was doing and it would be nice
if you cut some of the clip out of lets say the uke bashing replays
and make it to where I am not just seeing flailing arms and not see the opener
or even get a good look at the destruction.
Second suggestion would be some color correction; now I am not saying
that you need to overload the video with dark tinted color correction
I would say even adding a slightly lighter CC (color correction) can make the
vibrance and aesthetic really pop out in your video.
Now below this point is highly opinionated and you may ignore
these "tips" if you please these are just some things I would have done.

Color correction Vid
Pan/Crop Vid
Wiggle etc...