Originally Posted by Darkonix

There was no flow between transitions.. all of them were just kinda like.."Hi imma transition..(walks away)" It was kinda awkward

Your velocity choices didnt really match the music, made it kinda awkward flow wise..

Originally Posted by Chaos

Ok to start off all you did was cut up some clips keyframe
record and put some loud music.
I am not saying your video has to be full of effects and crazy shit
and although the overall video is satisfying and nice to watch
it still needs lots of work to become an 8/10 or a 10/10 video.
I have a few suggestions that are opinionated but I think most people
can agree with and agree it will make the video better.
First off your keyframing was good but there were some shots
that I couldn't even see what the tori was doing and it would be nice
if you cut some of the clip out of lets say the uke bashing replays
and make it to where I am not just seeing flailing arms and not see the opener
or even get a good look at the destruction.
Second suggestion would be some color correction; now I am not saying
that you need to overload the video with dark tinted color correction
I would say even adding a slightly lighter CC (color correction) can make the
vibrance and aesthetic really pop out in your video.
Now below this point is highly opinionated and you may ignore
these "tips" if you please these are just some things I would have done.

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Firstly I would have added a slightly bright cc with some higher contrast levels.
Secondly I would add a slight wiggle effects which can be in pan/crop
but I recommend downloading a scale and graph editor plugin
to sonyvegas from there you can go learn how to use scale and the graph
editor. This is a great video explaining this it is on After Effects but once you download
a scale and graph editor plugin you should be able to follow the tutorial spot on.
The video he made also has a premade light cc pack that looks pretty nice.
P.s. When making the wiggle make it very slight to give it a really smooth feel to it same goes for pan/crop.
Another thing I suggest is making little pumps or effects when one player hits another or a hard hit on uke bash
I have learned people like that and it feels satisfying even to the viewer.
Videos to help if you don't understand what I am saying

Color correction Vid
Pan/Crop Vid
Wiggle etc...

Originally Posted by TyZi

Try not to be lazy when syncing up your video. Cutting to the song is one thing, but making the cuts and the clip itself sync with the music is another. That effort shows and makes your video better.

On color correction, remember that the word is correction, meaning it alters or enhances the image. Yours looks like there's color slapped on top of the original video. Play around more with curves, then expand from there.

Good job finishing a video this long, it's tough. Good luck in your future videos.

Originally Posted by kendrikLMR

the better parts of the video were definitely the heavier/faster parts of the song, for your next edit I think you should try using a song that's fast all the way through. try to make it detailed with velocity and effects, 30 seconds is long enough

it's very hard to make a long video that will keep people watching, because if it's just the same stuff over and over again, people get bored and either skip or stop watching half way through. So i'd say practice by making lots of shorter videos, you'll get better faster this way by experimenting with different themes and effects