Originally Posted by TorixDemon

Good start but if you disable resamble and get RSMB and use some zooms it could be lit

Originally Posted by Keshava

Right click on your track> Switches> Disable Resample.

Also add RSMB.

I don't like how there were no keyframes at all at 0:58 and the camera was too far away.

Try adding some black bars to give it a more cinematic effect if you are making this more of a replay showcase than an edit.

Keyframing is quite all over the place, try to keep it smooth and make it flow, it's a bit hard to focus on the replay when the camera suddenly shifts with no warning.

Keyframing at 1:17 was not bad but it was a little bit too far away, also try to keep the important part of the replay in the center of the screen (in this case Tori).

When changing to the next clip try to do some sort of transition to keep it flowing, just cutting to another video is kind of boring.

I like what you did at 2:36 but Mack's tricking replay was too slow.

It seems your style is similar to that of Mocucha's or Ninosanz's, I suggest you go for those cinematic effects rather than over the top sync and colour correction, but you have improved, good job!

Originally Posted by kendrikLMR

to keep people watching, i would just try to make the video interesting with unique effects and a good theme. there's not really any trick to it apart from making a generally good video