Hi sir..

Trree was a p simple one. The opener was simple, but was ok. For the slap that you dm'd the hip, you failed on using your chest to make it more powerful and good. The chest was rotated to the oposite side. The transition and kick were pretty good. Transition to pose and pose were cool aswell.

As i said above, p simple. Keep working on what Mack told for you 3 weeks ago: "Just try to polish your stuff more I guess. Try to work on stuff until you feel it's finished and aim higher for every replay."