Originally Posted by royal

1 nice job copying glimpsed dork

2 nothing really was special, just the same normal stuff

3 when u slowed it down, you slowed it down too much and the shuriken part was weirdly synced and was bad

4 uke looked terrible btw so fix ur cc

5 work on making some sort of transitions and not just fading it to black/white

Originally Posted by Glimpsed

1 I can see you really tried on this edit, but your p/c needs a lot of work.

2 You generally want to make it look smoother if you want your edit to be cleaner.

3 There are extremely noticeable frame drops throughout the video and twixtor warping, which makes me wonder if you even cared about how the end product looks. You can easily avoid this by, well, not even going to that speed in the first place.

4 It's very easy to find another sync point nearby that isn't an obvious beat (this will also make the video a lot more interesting).

5I don't understand if you were going for a cartoonish style with this edit, but it didn't work, and it definitely isn't the look i would have gone for with this song anyway, considering it's very modern and electronic, which really doesn't fit the comic book/cartoon aesthetic.

6Overall, just put more time into polishing an edit, and if something is obviously off about it, then just use your brain and look for ways to fix that problem until you find the solution, because trust me, there is always a solution.