It's really not bad but I swear 95% of edits nowadays looks alike (I mean they're mostly so called "trap edits") sync was good, not a big fan of "black shader, blank tori" but I gues that's just a preference, vfxs are fine too, there wasn't much camera work but I can say that angles were also ok. There are only 2 big downsides to it imo - length and song. I know short edits are more convenient to make (heck I made way worse 16sec edits back in the day) but it's like you were hungry and only ate quater of your meal, it's tasty but you're still damn hungry then xD And the song, well idk maybe that's just me but I find it quite obnoxious but hey if you like it, use it that's your edit. Also about "trap edits", you clearly have editing skill to make decent edit, why not use this skill to make something fresh, something original instead of something that already has been done multipe times. Good luck m9