Originally Posted by
TyZi
The lines for the eyes and the santa hat being black with the rest of the lineart being brown is inconsistent, I'm thinking it'd look better if you avoid using solid black with this choice of coloring. No memes, but egoraptor is what comes to mind when I'm trying to explain this. I guess you'll add the rest of the hat in later wips, too.
Nose and mouth look a little too low..
Cool work, as always. Looking forward to the finished product.
Thanks for pointing that out, i'll definitely try to change the lineart to black and see how that works out. Nose and mouth positioning looks weird in 3D and i'm planning tk change that in the final version.
Thanks for the feedback! :-)
Last edited by poison; Dec 17, 2017 at 10:46 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump