The bones on the side of the forehead are really throwing me off tbh. They seem too up in the front of the forehead. The hairline comes down into a sharp point and its too low down. The metal piece also looks weird on the forehead just because it goes down so far. The bones on the sides of the frehead should be more towards the side of the head and I don't think they should be so defined because it looks inhuman as heck dude. The metal part over the mouth looks like its going inwards, the shading where it covers the nose doesn't really have any definition showing that its a mask and not a flat piece of metal. I'd remove the metal V shape on the forehead and see how it looks and how the hairline looks without that visor thing cuz its tripping me out lol