Cool replay, most mistakes I saw could be fixed simply by paying attention and trying to be more of a perfectionist (at 1455 your left elbow extends way before you start spinning, your left arm lowering and raising suddenly at 1290 is a bit jarring, kicking the floor at 450 makes your body bend a bit weird). Sometimes all you have to do to make some sudden movements look better is to synchronise them with the rest of your body, it helps you gather momentum a lot better (most people also think it looks better because of that, although opinions are not rules).
It took a while to get off some of the skeets, but at least you were doing some spins while setting up for them.