@SAUCE

actually didn't mind it and i'm not a fan of trap
i will say at about 00:41 when the background goes quiet you should bring the foreground either muffled as well, or change it to give a better vibe
i think you have a lot of potential for that area, and i'd love to hear what it sounded like without the bass

1:08-1:22, love the segway, could def juice it up a little unless you're sampling all of it i'm sure you could change the melody to make it more interesting

1:23-2:17, once again if you introduced a foreground changeup and kept the new melody you could have a banger, then finish it off with how the end is, which is totally fine

nice stuff so far rick, haven't checked out your stuff in a while and i didn't expect it to be good
once again, just suggestions from someone that doesn't know music too well