pretty boring in total, and nothing i haven't seen before in a short edit
the song doesn't seem to fit the visuals at all so the mood isn't met or even created
one is the colors, speed and motion of the shot
tyzi says this is all subjective, but i think moods are pretty standard and colors/styles emit these quite consistently
since you chose a rather slow song, none of these shots should be fast, and these colors are too upbeat and/or bright for it

another personal thing is that those black bars are terrible and idk when they became a norm on edits, but they make everything look like a badly cropped movie