Meh. Your freecam is horrid. If you want to do so much with pancrop, you should try to avoid a ton of movement with the freecam. You're super close to the toris too, which is good, but when I'm looking at literally nothing it's not as effective. Seems like you're just too lazy to keyframe a replay again.

Your velo could use a ton of work, too. :18 specifically.
You've got the flow and transitions going for you, but everything that has to do with the replays is unenjoyable and sloppy. White shader with a white tori with barely any contrast looks super bland, and there is seemingly no inbetween the "red" and "white"

Even the song is repetitive, so the sync is there but get's boring fast. (The video is only 40 seconds long and I didn't wanna finish it)
Compare it to something way better you've made and you're kinda disappointed with this. Definitely an unproductive step backwards imo.