the way you fell in your opener was very weird and slow, but I wouldn't say it could still be good if you had done it better.
This slight lift spinning kick is just as much eyecandy as your split kick, even though I saw the possibility of launching after the first spin or at least keeping more momentum so you wouldn't stop spinning so early, because I think your second spin is really weak.
The rest of the manip is cool and dms are nice but I don't see any highlight situation there, only simple raw dms (still different and well done nonetheless).
good replay overall