I actually don't like the way it progressed and got faster/louder. I would have preferred you stayed with the sound and feeling the beginning and end gave. Those parts sounded like someone grieving playing a sad song. I'm only good at piano improvisation, then writing down what I played. If you wrote this yourself beforehand it's quite good actually.

ya, just didn't like that middle part I understand the kind of feeling you were going for but from a musical standpoint it just wasn't as appealing to me as if it would have stayed with the same sound throughout

actually i cant write, or read, notes 8(
I agree with you, but the song isnt about sadness only
its about anger aswell

thanks organs, you are a nice guy

okay so etoria, i'll just ignore your ignorance since you seem to not really understand music
oh i also stated quite clearly that this is an early wip in the title
i usually dont add more depth to the song until i've got the melody and different parts set up

here's an example of a set up song i've made before: https://soundcloud.com/calle-ingenj-...lius/mountains
(this is not the studio recording of the song, which means it's far from perfected here)