when are u gonna learn how to keyframe a camera

I like what u did with toris.
very creative 4 once.
(dont kill me sly)

text at the end was p bad.
no sync what so ever.


tl;dr
DONT USE TEXT ENDINGS THAT DONT FIT.
VISUALS ARE COOL
AUDIO IS GARBAGE

The main thing you have to work on is learning how to keyframe and your sync.

It looked alright, like your standard toribash video with some cc or what ever that was on it, kind of boring.

Also you should work with some better replays.

I like the idea behind the cc

Unfortunately there was a lack of sync and some of the effects you slapped on (colour change, for example) didn't make the video better since there didn't appear to be a point

As others said, keyframing is important. You want to keep the tori in the focus of the camera, to have it close enough so you can see the little details but not too close that he keeps moving out of the shot/you can't see what's going on

Add some motion blur, it will make things look smoother

I understand that you want to use your own replays and you aren't a bad replay maker per se but you want to try to get smoother/less twitchy replays for video editing as they are easier to sync and more pleasing to the eye.