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[VID]Lawrence1 WIP
THIS VIDEO IS DONE. THE FULL VIDEO IS
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Last edited by TyZi; Mar 25, 2011 at 08:32 PM.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
Originally Posted by Jets
I Like it.
Good sync on some parts.
Nice effects.
Some shader changes were slight laggy.
And song already used in a toribash video
Could you link it to me? I haven't seen it, then. ._.;
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
Edited first post with full video. 
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
Maylene: Thanks for some real critique. Could you just explain why the song doesn't fit a toribash video? I used it because the words tell you how I feel about law <333
When I recorded with no sync, my computer was running very slow, and it was already laggy. I tried to make it as slow as I can without it looking TOO laggy.
When I recorded with no sync, my computer was running very slow, and it was already laggy. I tried to make it as slow as I can without it looking TOO laggy.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
Originally Posted by noomy
I'm sorry, but i didn't like it.
I don't care if a song is used in another vid, i think of it as recycling, but the clips were to slow for the music, the effects were sorta nice. I didn't see much of the sync everyone is talking about. I don't think i watched the whole thing (got a bit boring) but i saw most of it. If theres any awesome bits i missed near the endish just tell me.
Anyway, the good thing is, a top video maker can't get to much better, but there is lots of room for improvement here, can't wait to see some of your awesome ones
I'm aware the clips were slow. I'll be sure to work on the speed like in my previous video. Thanks
Originally Posted by Festus
I like it. Please go on. I would like to see a part where Law takes a hard hit, falls, some dramatic shit and effects go on, and then he gets up and kicks ass.
I'm sure I did half of that in the second-to-last replay, except for the part where he gets back up and kicks his ass. PM Law, I was only in the very last one.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up