Was awesome.Just get rid of the fucking beat boxing please i beg of you...XD.I can cover the drums for you dude?Than yu can just add it?
Bass isn't played that well, but I'm a bass player myself so I may be rather critical of it. The tone sounds fine, but it needs to be played a bit more in time and smoothly. Guitar sounds fine and I can't complain much about the vocals but it would probably sound a bit better if you belted out a bit more and showed your true singing voice instead of a controled soft voice.