Toribash
Original Post
Kiza's Practice Session
Oioi, I'm working on a lot of things. From ukebash to style, y'know. I won't expect any CnC but it is appreciated. Please don't post your own replays in here/post uselessly. This thread is really just to help me keep track of improvements/failures. Alrighty, time to post.

Edit -
P.S. This replay was solely based on spacing with 10 frames. I forgot about that restriction and shift+spaced now and then, but it was pretty minimal (making the pose, etc)
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Kiza_#Flow_Practice 1.rpl (391.3 KB, 62 views)
Last edited by Kiza; Aug 18, 2013 at 10:23 PM.
Opener + split looks great, really stylish.
Neck bothers me alot though.
The torso manip was a good idea, however the outcome of it was meh.
Messy head touches and the extended abs looked awkward, decap poorly aimed.

What I really like is how you end it, everything after the decap was very pretty.
Except that lazy twitch in the last frame.

Overall nice replay, messy parts and some movement things could've been fixed.
Last edited by zeto; Aug 21, 2013 at 12:16 PM.
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Huuuuuuur.

Thank you Based Skeet God. <:

Edit - The end may seem iffy, but it reminded me of a baby chick trying to fly, which I found a bit funny. SO ALLOW ME TO SHARE MY LAUGHTER WITH ALL OF YOU <3
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Kiza - Atitle.rpl (491.4 KB, 39 views)
Last edited by Kiza; Aug 22, 2013 at 10:22 PM.
Opener was pretty cool with that little knee slide thing. I was not really fond of the split but that is just my personal preference , the next hit was nice. I definitely love the skeets in this replay.

The first ass-skeetcap was nicely done.
The next one seems like you could have gotten maybe both the glutes with a bit of editing but I probably am wrong.
The next one was probably my favorite because you went through the arms of the torso and hit the head.
Also that leg thing that you did was pretty cool
Really nice replay

Also thank you for giving me that amazing cnc on my thread c:
Last edited by Internet; Aug 22, 2013 at 09:53 PM.
Welp, new practice replay.
I know, this style is really rough around the edges and slow, etc, but I'm working on it and starting to like it more and more. Hope you guys like it aswell.
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Kiza_#Style Change 1.rpl (440.2 KB, 30 views)
Welp, new page, new replay.
This wasn't much, really, just a random spark of my imagination.
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Kiza - Death Gods Like Apples.rpl (134.4 KB, 15 views)