Toribash
I really like it
The skeets are nice
There could have been another kick but it was nice
And i liked the part you did like airflares
Good job;)
Thanks Black.
And, here's a new replay. I have 3 skeets in it :3

Oh and..



EDIT: I know, it's soooooooo pusgalicious.
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Last edited by Lololerz; Apr 25, 2012 at 12:32 AM.
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10/10 because pusga

The opener is perfect, nothing to change.
First kick is ok, but you were too close to Uke. Maybe if you were farther away you could hit him with your foot instead.
The next kick wasn't bad, it was a bit generic though.
Skeet 1: "Nice"
Skeet 2: "Dayum"
Skeet 3: "Omgwtftripleskeetrainbowsauce"

8.6/10 because skeets. Good job.


EDIT

Out of hand: Nice opener, good momentum there.
Clean split, perfect.
I liked the kick, somehow. Not much dms and a bit messy, but fuck it, my brain likes it.
Punch is sexy, even with your elbow. Surprised how you didn't dm it.
Final kick fapfapfapfapfapfafpfafpapfapfpapf
Pose stopped me from fapping though, change that.

8.1/10

EDIT 2

Random Crap: Generic opener, didn't like it much.
The knee was strange, but ok, it did it's job.
I loved how you dmd the glute, that's original.
Next kick was messy, but it was also good because I could fap to it.
The decap was very wierd, grabbing and ungrabbing before the punch looked a bit strange.


NOTE: IMO, you need to start kicking with your foot and not your ankle and thigh. You already do pretty well now, I can imagine how sexy you will do with your feet.
Last edited by pusga; Apr 25, 2012 at 12:19 AM.
oh yeah