Artificial Ideology

Rube Goldberg

Watching your last two replays it literally felt like night and day. Artificial Ideology was sick. Good opener, great speed, super smooth, and great creativity. And then Rube Goldberg which wasn't as satisfying. The replay was slow, not as neat and smooth, and lacked the same amount of effort put into Artificial Ideology.

Both replays are solid, Artificial Ideology is a really well done replay and I enjoyed watching it. If I would suggest anything it would be to invest the same amount of time into your replays to maximize their potential. Your a skilled replay maker with good creativity and that aspect needs no analyzing. Keep up the good work!

TaDa

i think that you just need to improve a bit with the speed.
also, relax more those elbows, lol

Silent Waltz

gj on the booms
u sometimes keeped the flow then just went for the dms
simple opener
i dont like that u holded uke (c) to get the leg dm... u could have tried to get knees without uke being at hold all.
anyway gj
7\10

Clockwork

Null

good to see you back

i liked the spar, it was nice!

that first kick by uke after the spin looked clean and pristine, nice job!

bit of stop-and-start in the beginning, smooths out during the middle, and a big one near 350, which doesnt look good imo.

overall, you did a nice job making this to shake off the rust work on controlling both tori's again, and you'll be set! i loved the hits, most of them were spot on and looked very precise, but watch out for your flips and twirls, as some of them were wonky and unrealistic.

it's nice to finally see some work from you, i'd love it if we could do a parkour sometime!