Toribash
me and datskip did this a while ago but I dont think it ever reached the forums so, yeah
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Got a few tips from Xioi when it came to running. Tried a few maps and this is the progress. A bit twitchy here and there, and rushed toward the end.
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Quirks and some meh moments here and there that are kinda rushed and easy to spot you didn't bother spending time on. But definetely your best parkour up untill now and one of the funnest things i've seen in a while with cool things added in aspects from running/turns/climbs.

You know most of the pointers and most of the things i don't like and like that you do already after the fact that i sat and told you what to push n shit, and us talking about it in general.

In any case, fun to see you're still evolving. Ima try and outdo this to give you some friendly competition <3
Last edited by Xioi; Apr 9, 2018 at 12:39 AM.

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Thanks!

Originally Posted by Xioi View Post
In any case, fun to see you're still evolving. Ima try and outdo this to give you some friendly competition <3


You better :^)
Not exactly sure what the differences are between this tori and the default one so its hard to comment, but that was a great little spin your did on the ground before the last trick.
oh yeah
Your tricking replays are so damn fluid, I like all of 'em. Pretty impressed with that last one too, the tricks are so different from what i'm accustomed to seeing
Thank you both, originality is my current main objective in tricking.
I'm not quite sure what the difference is either, it might just be slightly enhanced tori strength. Whatever it is, it's fun as hell.
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
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I'm not entirely sure what's up with some of your replays, I mean they're okay-ish but there's a whole lotta weird stuff going on. Like the one in your latest replay, there wasn't anything pretty cool or impressive there, the short manip wasn't much special and there weren't a whole lot of good looking dm's and the pose looks rather rushed into a rather contorted position.

Wishes and stitches was alright though, I like the fluidity. but it's nice if you make it a goal to at least do at least a boom whenever you grab onto uke. It's my personal opinion, however. Also, red wine's pretty fine, but starting off with a grab left a rather odd flavour to the replay. You could get a second boom there I think

Hm, I think you can do way better. There's a whole lot of room for improvement~