Toribash
i like the spins n shit, but your arms are hella stiff. i dont think you bent them at all for the whole opener until you went for that punch. also ik its not refined so the twitches are expected, but i like the movement aside from that. cool booms too.
Originally Posted by Static View Post
i like the spins n shit, but your arms are hella stiff. i dont think you bent them at all for the whole opener until you went for that punch. also ik its not refined so the twitches are expected, but i like the movement aside from that. cool booms too.

Thanks mate, at first I was thinking of tryharding a manip or something with the opener, but I wasn't that happy with it, so I just did some dm'ing for 10 min instead!
ay so this replay is cool and all, but its like unfinished. its like you just stopped mid way through. you should continue this cause that kick was slick af
That's a rad looking opener, I feel like if you look more into it you can certainly get more out of it. However I like where you went with it, everything was neat but felt safe. My only advise to you is experiment with stuff and see where it takes you. You've got potential, use it.
sleepy
Originally Posted by Swepples View Post
Felt bored and did a thing in -30. Apart from the lazy dm's I think it turned out cool.

Took 2 hours.

First thing i noticed was how you contracted you right knee at 420 just to extend it again right after, it triggered me, but i guess it was necesary to not bump in to Uke. Same thing happened right after the split, contract, extend, and then another contract, but this one isn't really as noticeable.

I guess the way you move right after the decap looks a little bit choppy and makes the upper part of your body look really unnatural aswell. Other than that this replay is fucking insane, love how you get up to the stance at the end aswell.
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mmh
as mused said, you could have done more with the opener, try to mess around and do wierd shit.
i really like how the kick was done tho, it looked quite stylish imo
the grab thing was wierd.
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .
ok first off the replay feels unfinished. I notice this in a lot of your replays and its like such a tease. also makes you seem lazy. ok so opener is pretty standard no problems there. elbow bump could have been avoided. nice split and nice direction change into 3dm.

ok so what i mean by unfinished is you just stop there when you could do so much more. you literally landed on the legs and even grabbed them. i used to do this a lot too where id just stop. beat up uke some more. other than that pretty standard replay gj.
this is sum smooth shit u got there.
the replay was basicly flawless
however it had more potential
you could have done a little manip or something
gj overall
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .