Toribash
I like your openers - they are creative and nice to watch.
The first kick was fast and thats what I liked about it.
The second was could have been more powerful with a little more momentum.
The transition into the pose was slow and the pose itself could have been a lot better; looked generic, etc.

The opener was a little strange imo. But it's ok because you made that replay quickly :v
First kick was really nice, but I think you can do better
Glute kick was nice too, and also the decap
Your movement is really unique and I like it :o
Pose was k
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Originally Posted by chamara View Post
Combo's and speed was pretty amazing.
Looks like you started to use your whole body to gain speed. Good job.
Style and flow was great but you should have made at least one boom in the replay because you gain alot of speed. If you removed the knee DM and worked a bit more on the first hit, it could have been a boom.
Pose was okay.
It is pretty awesome for a quick replay.

I wasn't going for boomhits. Still, you managed to miss the boomhit. You need glasses.
I always used my whole body to gain speed. I do it very quickly for a limited number of frames, or else I'd just be whobbling around like I'm having a seizure.
oh yeah
I love the synchronization of the first three dms you did. I rarely see those stuff happen in replays. The boom and decap combo was nice, not much to say about that. The landing and pose could've been done better though.
Edited
funniest part is how I got a lot more dismemberments but still didn't get that chest-lumbar
sorry, Jingles
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oh yeah
Your spins are nice and flashy, but you should try working on your set ups.
Most of those were kick offs which aren't pretty realistic.
Also, you should try doing a different varieties of tricks.
When in the middle of a cork, you should try having your knees slightly bent so that you don't look too stiff, like in that last cork.
You're landings are nice and solid, and your transitions are good and smooth.
Work on your set ups and try moving into different tricks, and you'll be great.