Opener felt a bit jerky, but was still acceptable and looked fine, same thing with the transition with the grab, and you ghosted there you silly fellow.
The grab itself didn't look bad at all, and was followed up by a mildly powerful kick, but I expected a more creative way to remove the cockblock from the torso.
The skeets made up for all these flaws (Or what I'd rather see changed), as they were great.
I'd have loved for the cockblock to have rebounded the torso and hit the head.
Pose transition was also pretty dang good
Overall, it's a pretty nice replay, but there are some problems with it I'd like to see you change for future replays.
Chocolate girl however was ace, apart from the ghosting at the end.