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[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????
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the opener had a good idea on it but i think it would have looked better if you made it longer?
the first two hits pretty much have nothing wrong with them
the third hit looked a little twitchy
last hit was meh. may looked better without it.
overall the replay is pretty good but still generic. maybe you can go more creative next time?
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .
Thanks, Alpha, I'll work on it.


Bump, I still want some CnC.

[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????
I forgot how to replaymake for a while.
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[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????
Hey tabby, I usually like replays like these, but you probably should've kept this one for yourself. <3
Opener is quite shit man, come on :^)
First boom is cool, nothing special about it, packs a good punch.
Transitions between the 2 booms, idk man. Looks like a brown belt is doing a setup for his first spin kick in a spar. Especially with the held knee, the extend-immediately-contract knee and all.
Second hit is a bit quick, got the job done.
No decap
Please move your tori in transitions man, it looks sooo boring when you don't. I know I get too twitchy or choose a bad transition. But hey, moving is key.
Last edited by Swepples; Feb 28, 2018 at 05:24 PM.
A bit twitchy at times. I swear I've seen that opener from somewhere else, I might be wrong though, did you make it yourself or was it insipred/taken from another place? Relatively good other than that. lacks creativity in general.
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
|Replays|
"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
Thanks for the cnc everyone, I'll get to work on a v2 version and it will hopefully be better in terms of transitions.

Originally Posted by Mack View Post
I swear I've seen that opener from somewhere else, I might be wrong though, did you make it yourself or was it insipred/taken from another place?

I made that opener myself, though as uncreative and common as it is I would imagine it has been made many times prior.

[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????