thanks



hello btw

i mightve posted this but oh well lol

someone posted here but its gone now oh no

opener is pretty nice
lift was rather weird but it got the job done so whatever
a bit of silence between the lift and the dms but i like the movement for the knee dm
dms were good and clean but really, no decap? i appreciate not taking the obvious dm pattern but it just feels off here, uke was asking for it bro

made this idk when but not recently and i didnt finish it and im too lazy to do that now so uh hello

20k views cool

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oh yea i agree man i guess i'll try fix that i'll post it when im done

it's a pretty cool spinny opener but you did indeed get bored of it, the dm was pretty meh and lacked flair to me, you could probably brew up something better by editing around 320

got bored of this: opener wasn't too complex at first but I liked how you followed up well with this flow. Your speed was amazing and you started moving at the very moment you touched the floor. I think this starting was very creative and I really liked your movement, I had to watch it many times in order to formulate a proper opinion xD. One of my favorite things in this opener was this foot grab, it didn't make a difference at all (visually) but the grab sound made it lovely to watch

Now, from then on, there are a couple things that didn't please much as much as the beginning. In spite of the speed you got and a really good position you managed to get with a great control of your momentum and flow, around frame 369 you lost grip of the floor and just killed the momentum. I'm not saying you have to keep your tori at 70 sm the whole time but you killed your momentum just after you acquired it, what makes your replay more somewhat "random" due to the lack of a pace/fashion in your patterns.
Nothing really wrong about it, just personal thoughts

to the dms, if you go to frame 316 you'll see that you had your chest fully rotated at the moment you hit uke. Regarding to this you lost power after hit, you had almost no spin after this hit because you "spent" it before even hitting uke and then your tori just freezes and float towards the ground. However, I don't see how you could avoid all this while keeping this good movement and dms as you was really close to uke, getting this angle would be a pain in the ass so... This worked fine :^)

I wouldn't be able to make this replay any better, but just have in mind these thoughts while making your next replays if you agree with me

Overall this is pretty nice dude, gg ♥

oh sorry i was busy hhh thanks guys


prob posted this