Deepest Void: Okay running, the first spin looked alright, but not a fan of the landing.
The next one looked good, but again I didn't like the landing that much.
The jump was pretty good, but I didn't like how you had to use your hand to help land.
The backflip was pretty regular, the second one was nicer.
The way you jumped was a bit akward, but the trick itself was pretty good.
The next backflip didn't look very appealing because it didn't have much momentum.
Overall, it's a pretty nice replay.
Slender: The foot block looked a bit strange, but the punch dodge was pretty cool.
Uke did some wierd movements after that and it wasn't flowish.
Tori's movements however were great.
I think that grab was a bit messy, but it's acceptable since you wanted to hold Uke like that.
Uke's reaction had a lot of leg movement, and I think it would be more realistic to make more arm swinging.
The next one looked good, but again I didn't like the landing that much.
The jump was pretty good, but I didn't like how you had to use your hand to help land.
The backflip was pretty regular, the second one was nicer.
The way you jumped was a bit akward, but the trick itself was pretty good.
The next backflip didn't look very appealing because it didn't have much momentum.
Overall, it's a pretty nice replay.
Slender: The foot block looked a bit strange, but the punch dodge was pretty cool.
Uke did some wierd movements after that and it wasn't flowish.
Tori's movements however were great.
I think that grab was a bit messy, but it's acceptable since you wanted to hold Uke like that.
Uke's reaction had a lot of leg movement, and I think it would be more realistic to make more arm swinging.
oh yeah
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