Ere we go boi
so like hold openers are good if you have a good transition to other stuff, but in this one I feel like you hesitated a bit so it looked a bit edgy. Raised arm didn't look too good I think. I liked setups for kicks but at the very end you like hit with your shin every single time instead of going for clean hits and it was eh. The first kick I almost thought you gonna make into lift and go for a manip but nope. Second kick I liked the most, It was messy too but you hit a chunk of joints so it was okay, although I would prefer you to get more dms (MORE DMS). Transition from 1st to second kick was a bit rushed, but the second transition was nice I think. 3rd kick was bleh, aiming was way off. At the end you hit your head, which is also eh. Sexy pose ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º)