not my usual kind of style, but i think this one is worth posting anyway

pretty much what Z said above. Your dms were ok, just try to get some inspiration for movements, relax more your legs. A thing to be noticed is that the first punch had a really good technique.

Good luck with the improvements. Hope you get some dope material.

i see what you mean.
the left leg looks stiff especially, doesnt look too good.
and a little forward motion would have made the replay more fluid.
thanks for the critique.

BUT

You wont find a fluid and relaxed replay at any point of time in this thread though.
I think there are enough toribashers who make those.
I'm working on finding my own style, which i want to be mostly on hold-all base and a lot of stiff elbows and knees.

Still ive got a lot to learn. especially when it comes to gaining speed.

here is a more exaggerated replay which could give you a hint to which direction i wanna go.

Thank you.
the tense look is probably due to the hold all in every frame lol.

woop woop

8/10 is exactly what i strive for hehe
btw i dont post the replays right after i made them.
some are new, some are like 5 years old

also thanks for the critique

this one is new and funny :>
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id also like to hear some comments on "too much is too much"

so im getting a new toribash version after more than one year and i thought i should store some replays here if i ever wanna look at them again.
feel free to look at and comment them.