Toribash
Originally Posted by Membrain View Post
It's still very rough and more detail is coming. I'm keeping this one black and white till I get all the details in. Anyway, here is where I am at now:

Nice and Nasty WIP#3



@ Vanish: Looks nice to me. The only aspect that doesn't look feminine is the nose. It's a bit wide around the nostrils. Can't wait to see how you handle the back!

I’m definetely amazed with the head right now as there is still some other details coming. I’m really impressed by the nasty side of the head.
Can’t wait to see more of your WIPs!
Agus and Foobi, two biggest losers of Toribash
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Originally Posted by Membrain View Post
I haven't done much, but wanted to post an update before I get to enjoying my Saturday night.

Nice and Nasty WIP #4



I threw on some color to see what things would look like. The final color will be different and have lighter areas on the faces. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with the teeth, but they will not be so bright. I'm planning on adding a little more detail to the sides depending on what I can fit there. For some reason I wanted to add the band aid, but that can be removed. Lastly the final addition will be some tears.

Thanks!

more detail on the sides would be awesome! the band aid would actually fit in pretty well after some thinking, but in it's current state, i would prefer the band aid being one of those used rotten old band aids to fit in better.
Agus and Foobi, two biggest losers of Toribash
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here we go!

flat - done



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Originally Posted by BlueEvil View Post
here we go!

flat - done



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Great head! But not really what im looking for, the head you made has that abstract touch to it. I’m looking for something more like what membrain is doing.
But it’s really not bad, just not what im looking for. Sorry!
Agus and Foobi, two biggest losers of Toribash
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the sharp teeth actually fits the back side of the head very well!
the side details are really amazing as well, shows how the head is a little stretched. but how about we try adding some of those creepy webs or white hair on the side of the head as shown in the ref picture, if that's possible.
I do not have anything to comment about the color at least for now. everything else is doing really great!
Agus and Foobi, two biggest losers of Toribash
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I love what you did with the colour!
I got nothing else to say/comment.
I’ll be looking forward to the next WIP!
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actually, after looking at it ingame, i noticed how the front face looked really chubby. is there a possible way to fix that?
Last edited by Scar; Mar 13, 2018 at 09:09 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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hmm the tears doesn't seem natural, how bout having one of the eye's waterdrops to reach the chin already or split into more water pathways?
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Originally Posted by Membrain View Post

Nice and Nasty WIP #7



She's crying because you called her "chubby."

I will see what I can do to take off a few pounds.

after taking a really long look, the hair strands/webs do not really fit there tbh. Sorry lol but would you mind removing it?
Last edited by Scar; Mar 13, 2018 at 04:47 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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tried the head ingame. just something about the front side is bugging me and i'm not really sure what it is.
how about we change one of the eyes into something like: https://imgur.com/a/dmjHK
like a broken bleeding eye perhaps.
and something about the forehead is really disturbing. how about putting a creepy symbol/scar on the forehead?
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Liking it way better now! Thats neat.
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