Originally Posted by Swepples
Nice man, you progress pretty nicely. Now you only have to figure out how to make sure uke doesn't float away from you. I'd suggest you edit before the split, try to get more momentum toward uke and force your way through the split, instead of bouncing away from him. Opens up more opportunity not to end the replay poorly.
I've had this sort of as a second project, still working on it.
Also i made a new replay, I keep getting better and better, really proud of this one actually. Feedback is appreciated as always.
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I did this thing today, i quite like it so i figured i'd post it.
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This is by far the most fucking insane replay i have made, ever. Please, PLEASE, do CnC it.
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Okay so you asked me to CnC this. I'm gonna tear your jell-o shot asshole a little wider with this one.
So the first 70 frames are an absolute waste and the ugliest fucking thing you could do. Please never horse stand again or contract your wrists. that shit is so ugly and displeasing.
the next 100 frames of spin are just as much displeasing. You go so slow and it's really not very smooth. It almost looks like you struggled to get this to go how you wanted. instead of you controlling the tori it looked like it said you were it's bitch during that.
First hit you barely hit his hip and only dm'd his glute, I personally dislike single dm hits other than decaps or things like skeets. you didnt even follow through on it then proceeded to reverse all momentum you had immediately after the dm
~333 your body is just in a really weird position, and the grab you have is super awkward on his forearm. The following kick has okay placement and I'm happy you got the boom but you still missed the head and it seemed like you tapped him instead of kicking him, you also again proceeded to completely reverse any momentum you had at this point too.
Arm dm wasn't bad, I like how you kept the momentum going to throw it but the throw just ew, honestly ew, look where your body is when you let go of the arm, it's such a bad spot and you even had a full rotation to get a good stance and turn to throw it.
The ending/pose is whatever, you do you.
Overall it wasnt bad, im impressed and proud joel. solid 4.5/10 overall and it's easily the best replay you've personally made. Keep up the good work. <3
So the first 70 frames are an absolute waste and the ugliest fucking thing you could do. Please never horse stand again or contract your wrists. that shit is so ugly and displeasing.
the next 100 frames of spin are just as much displeasing. You go so slow and it's really not very smooth. It almost looks like you struggled to get this to go how you wanted. instead of you controlling the tori it looked like it said you were it's bitch during that.
First hit you barely hit his hip and only dm'd his glute, I personally dislike single dm hits other than decaps or things like skeets. you didnt even follow through on it then proceeded to reverse all momentum you had immediately after the dm
~333 your body is just in a really weird position, and the grab you have is super awkward on his forearm. The following kick has okay placement and I'm happy you got the boom but you still missed the head and it seemed like you tapped him instead of kicking him, you also again proceeded to completely reverse any momentum you had at this point too.
Arm dm wasn't bad, I like how you kept the momentum going to throw it but the throw just ew, honestly ew, look where your body is when you let go of the arm, it's such a bad spot and you even had a full rotation to get a good stance and turn to throw it.
The ending/pose is whatever, you do you.
Overall it wasnt bad, im impressed and proud joel. solid 4.5/10 overall and it's easily the best replay you've personally made. Keep up the good work. <3
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