Looks nice, definitely going in right direction.
I can play around with camera a bit (e.g. zoom in on youngster) if you need to "hide" some weird-looking sensei movements.

Nah, I can make everything cleaner if need be. Aside from the walking back and forth and the pauses, was there anything else you wanted added on?

I was thinking for the end, sensei would use his walking cane like a bostaff and show off his skill, and then smash the tip of his bo staff into the ground as an ending, like a pose.

Let's keep him somewhat calm for this replay, there will be more needed later.

can I add some "comic situation" in scene 1?

I've become a little wrapped up in other projects and irl, if someone would like to continue mine and finish it i'd be more than grateful.

welp, sorry if I am copying you too much Karbn but I was out of ideas after failing doing a single handed walk with this staff and such. But, if I end up not being able to do this thing and sir allow us to "collab" I'd be up to finish yours would be a honor

anyways, this is how mine is going. And I was thinking about the pupil jumping on feet over the bench and starting punching the air like: "I wanna kick sum ass" and then the sensei hit him with the staff and he sits back, though I'm not sure if this will be possible to do smoothly

collabs are ok

I decided to do on my own

@sir: what do you think? Should I keep going? What should be changed? (etc.)

wElp

The mods wouldn't dl for me, would just open in a new tab so i pasted it in modmaker hope that doesn't change anything. doing a self spar is pretty easy for me but any tips for the speech? if i don't get a reply i'm just gonna upload the spar when i finish it.