If we compare the videos you've added. The first one is better, but the thing is that you only made the second on in ~1 hour, so that's relevant for going downhill.

If you focus on quality before quantity you'll get better results.

First video: Really nice camera angles and somewhat sweet transitions, you can improve the transition by adding blur effect to try to match the camera angles when making a transition.
You can try to focus closer to Uke and Tori when it's dm replays, but parkour/spars/tricking can be further away with the camera.
If you try to add some minimalistic effects, such as small sparkles when dm'ing or ambient effects, you'll get, in my opinion, a much greater feeling of the surrounding.

Second video: Same there with transition, add blur keyframe 2-3 frames before jumping into next clip to get smooth transition.
Try to sync the clip with the kick/snare when it comes to dm's.

This is just personal experience, it's your way to create creative videos, but that's my cnc for you
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If we compare the videos you've added. The first one is better, but the thing is that you only made the second on in ~1 hour, so that's relevant for going downhill.

If you focus on quality before quantity you'll get better results.

First video: Really nice camera angles and somewhat sweet transitions, you can improve the transition by adding blur effect to try to match the camera angles when making a transition.
You can try to focus closer to Uke and Tori when it's dm replays, but parkour/spars/tricking can be further away with the camera.
If you try to add some minimalistic effects, such as small sparkles when dm'ing or ambient effects, you'll get, in my opinion, a much greater feeling of the surrounding.

Second video: Same there with transition, add blur keyframe 2-3 frames before jumping into next clip to get smooth transition.
Try to sync the clip with the kick/snare when it comes to dm's.

This is just personal experience, it's your way to create creative videos, but that's my cnc for you

CnCs are appreciated

the part in 0:19 to 0:25 looked a bit rushed and a little unpolished.
but hey, thanks again man

thanks for the CnC guys, i appreciate it
but i'm currently having a problem now, i don't know how to not be lazy in making videos, i mean... at first i was like really hyped about the project i'm making but then when i finished half of it i just become lazy and not interested in that project anymore
That's the reason why in some video, the start seems more inspired and more effort spent than the rest. For example the VII clan video one, i was really hyped about it at first but then when i almost finished it, i just left if there for a month and i just like... forcing and dragging myself just to finish it, help me, i need some tips :<

i really like your videos as well pls include me ahaha

i'm subscribing because the transitions and everything was so fucking cool.

i'm still desperately waiting for replays
also here's a wip so my post won't be useless

hesh