Toribash
Originally Posted by Instep View Post
Thanks for the tip!

We fixed the ending, what do you think?


this should be in da stock folder



This was surprisingly very hard, I was never really good at skeets. I shall try to get more though.
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Decided to do something old fashioned.

A Small Planet
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Last edited by Instep; Jan 15, 2024 at 04:14 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
"It doesn't have to be perfect to be wonderful"
My replay thread
I feel like I've gotten worse at low grav stuff xD

Lady of the Sleeping Brocade
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"It doesn't have to be perfect to be wonderful"
My replay thread
cool replay, your lumbar movement could use a ton of refinement though and I wish you took extra care to remove the part where uke's hand blatantly scrapes the ground and your shoulders are very twitchy at times most notably between 620-500 ish but not exclusively there

the touches at 485 and 375 are very stylish and had you juiced them up a little more it could have led to a very fast and impressive manip

dms are extremely wasteful here, I'm fine with one-hit replays but when the hit is a torso/groin kick that dismembers basically every joint it touches except one in between the whole boomhit I find it difficult to support especially when it comes from a cop-out grab

there are a lot of idle frames where you are not moving/barely moving and I suggest trying to iron those out with more dynamic movement but its mostly due to how floaty your movement is which is to be expected when you are not primarily a lower gravity player

keep making replays

[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????