Hi cool replay
opener looks fine to me, i like the wrist movement =)
manip looks really cool, it's a shame he practically punches you in the liver at 1300ish though, but i don't know how i would've avoided that either. it's cool how close to the ground he gets at like 1210. not sure how much of this manip you'll be keeping since it's a wip, but i think you should edit at around 1180 and try to sync up your arm a bit better so you can put some more juice on that push, because i think it'll make it a lot easier to continue from there like that since it is -15. the way your head closely weaves over uke's shoulder at like 1250 to avoid that headbruise is so cool
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tabby
keep making replays
wise words