Toribash
uh i mean

the whole first part where you just stand still and punch is just boring and i dont even know
it shows that you can balance while punching i suppose

however, the running punches and kicks are really cool. nice
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Pretty much what the others said.

Addore the last forward moving attacks, Make that on a selfspar/spar with someone dodging like crazy and it will be amazing

Retired
pretty good
I dont like how they start out the same.
I dont like how tori gets up and gets in position from the ground.
Hits were solid.
gj, continue.
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Nice Take down (Jisse tori) its a move That people who
know these martial arts just recognize. Good job jisse. to bad your head touched
uke and glowed red. but no bigdeal somtimes it just should .

nice heel kick too (Uke)

Your learning it.

But Try to take more steps and stances the way you would do it irl. i leard that many extending and contracting should be done to make a toribash take the stance YOU WANT it to take, so make time for it . YOU want it to do a move, so dont let it move the way its likely going to do.

example :
when you wanted to step back. you kept the legs really extended. dont keep
it extended to avoid looking like a drafting compass to draw circles.

what I do to step to a direction:

1. I place the weight to the direction i want to go, so that the ghost shows
like its gonna fall that direction

2. the stepping leg should bend its knee a little. ( shorter than the leg that still holds)

3. extend the knee gently of the stepping to catch the weight .

4. i do 2 and 3 again for the other leg to do a second step.

5. I twist the chest or pecs in some direction for some contra movement to stay balanced

( if you look at my taekwondo replay, you will see how it takes steps after
it got a hit in the face in frame 2800)
Thanks for the CnC everyone :)
And Bink, I'm trying to create my own unique style, a mix between spinning and actual fighting, rather than going for a super realistic type of fighting. Good tips though.

I would also like to thank Nearlydead for inspiring me to make this masterpiss.
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