Toribash
Thank you

Trying out something new, tried not to be grabby.
Also look closely at the dms before you say it's messy please :V
Attached Files
pusga - Trypophobia.rpl (237.8 KB, 26 views)
oh yeah
Your opener was a bit stiff, and I disliked how your head bobbled.
The first kick was nice, but it looked stiff. You could've also added more power to it to make it a boom.
After that, your legs stayed stiff for quite a long time along with your left arm.
The decap was okay, but your arm was stiff.
The back kick was stiff, and you could've also made a boom with a little more accurate aiming.
You were still stiff in the legs for the rest of the replay. You should try to relax your knees sometimes. I saw some moments when you could have.
The next kick was also stiff and, again, you could've made that a boom.
It's the same flaws with next kick. Again, stiff in the legs for the last kick.
Most importantly, you were grabbed for way too long. Try working on doing non-grabbed hits.
The pose was very interesting, but....stiff. However, I do understand you need to keep your legs maintained for balance, so, that's excused.
Overall, you were way too stiff, you did way too many grab hits, you didn't take any boom opportunities, and you should try to aim your hits more accurately.
You should mainly try to relax a bit more and focus on gaining some hits without grabbing uke. :3

My thread is dead, please save it. <3
Opener was a bit random I guess, your tori moves awkwardly.
First kick was ok, but you can make a chest dm or something. Decap was ok
Back kick was nice. Third kick was nice, try making a boom.
Fourth kick was ok, last kick was nice.
Pose was nice, y u no maek skeet?
8/10 :o
Ohai, requesting cnc c:
Last edited by Lololerz; May 31, 2012 at 12:47 PM.
~
Lol: Sure, I'll do it when I have the time.

Thanks guys.

Something I made, thanks to Larfen for the tips.
Attached Files
pusga - Lifelines.rpl (156.9 KB, 20 views)
oh yeah
Dat manip was freakin sexy. Especially when you spin uke onaround frame 280.
Loved how you stop the spinning uke
Decap and split was really nice!
Don't really like the lax all before the spin, but the spin it self was awesome.
9.6/10
~
Thanks, been a while since I got ratings like that
new replay, but this one is totally rushed
also I know the skeet sucks, but I seriously had nothing to do with that cockblock
Attached Files
pusga - Cherry Cluster.rpl (260.5 KB, 22 views)
oh yeah