Toribash
Original Post
[ME] Tori's Haiku
[ME] Tori's Haiku



Your objective in this event is to write a haiku related to toribash.
A haiku is a poem which exists of three lines.
The amount of syllables are 5-7-5

Example of a haiku





You must create the haiku entirely by yourself.
You can have one submission only.
You can change the submission as much as you like.

Only Monks and former monks can enter.


The use of language
The use of themes from Toribash
The quality of the haiku



1st:
2nd:


18th of March - 2015



Last edited by TimmyboyG; Mar 14, 2015 at 01:40 PM.

i am a bird now - Lil B

Tori reigns weak uke,
uke is inflicted with strain,
He is like a tori-chain
S I L I C O N E F E E T
I wanted to make one, but it won't be judged.

Devine movements flow
Strong yet gentle as the sea
Graceful wushu fights

i am a bird now - Lil B

Originally Posted by ChuckTori View Post
Haha yeah! Still cant believe I got second place xD

I liked yours. It was funny.

i am a bird now - Lil B