Jeez bro that replay was sexy. loved the fast spin into the split and then boom, sexy rpls as always bro

this replay probably suits the title of my thread best

an old replay of mine that i edited

it's alright

woops, thought I posted about _Bank?
hmm
_lief erikson
Don't like the generic opener with extended abs.
Think it also might have been nicer if your right leg stayed on the floor in the midst of getting low, but it's cool.
I've always liked launches like that... what I didn't like was how you quickly (and maybe sneakily) used your right leg at 367 to get a bigger launch, and then contract it back at 362...
I think it would have been fine if you just flailed through the air.
The extension and contraction of your leg just before hitting uke is ugly.
Decap was nice and clean, glad that's there.
I absolutely hate how you went in for a kick with your left leg, and then changed the whole direction of where your tori was going for the hit.
However, the boom from the right leg on the ass was nice, and then the follow up chest kick was also nice.
I don't the stiffness of the replay generally, and you should keep practising.
Also, nice pose.

KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

i feel like you could've extended your pec during the setup for the first skeet, so you would have had to slow down and move your arm all the way to the other side just to throw that one hand. it wouldve added to the spin too

other than that its a great replay with cool spins and whatnot

planned to upload this a while go

anyway, here's a thing

some twitchiness here and there

don't know if I agree with the launch to the dm kick, looks a bit meh.

why is the kick at 280 existant

boom es nice, really cool.

decap is cool aswell.

transition to pose and pose are okay

Pretty slow, but still nice. I really liked the beginning, and the kick looked really nice, albeit a little wimpy. Transition to the pose was good, but the pose was lacking. Still a really cool replay, the decap was sick.

thanks guys

practicing making openers now i suppose