1st replay of the year

for the first 120 frames of the opener you were just kinda falling there, kinda detracts from the quality of the setup although you executed from it well

some instances where your movement was stiff: right arm stayed raised for a bit around 330-290 and the extension/contraction of the split kick. i think you should relax your joints a little more, felt like your legs were either fully contracted or fully extended throughout the replay

i like the upper body lift

the dms were alright if a bit too grabby, just needs a tiny bit of work on refining the angles. for the decap, you hit juust above the neck at first, better grab placement would also have improved upon it. for the awkwardness of your position, you actually did well with the last kick, good job

the way you fell in your opener was very weird and slow, but I wouldn't say it could still be good if you had done it better.

This slight lift spinning kick is just as much eyecandy as your split kick, even though I saw the possibility of launching after the first spin or at least keeping more momentum so you wouldn't stop spinning so early, because I think your second spin is really weak.

The rest of the manip is cool and dms are nice but I don't see any highlight situation there, only simple raw dms (still different and well done nonetheless).

good replay overall

collabd with Rose tell me what u think

there are /em's for who did what parts

alright i spent like 5 days on this and fucked my sleep schedule jolly good right before school starts again so u better watch it.

Pretty solid manip man, I'd say that there were certain points where your flow could have been better and you could have made the movement look more natural by relaxing stuff, but that's probably just my personal preference as someone who does more realistic styles. Great job

hello i havent made a replay in 3 years so this is a bit shit, anyways please look at my replay