Loving that opener and split.
I have no idea how you are going to attack his chest, but the crotch kick looks promising.

Kay, finished the wip \o/

I liked the skeets, but maybe you could get a decap with the skeet.
The crotch kick was pretty good, but I see a lot of joints that go red and don't dismember.

A wip of a self spar \o\

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The opener was stiff, specially the mid air part, but it is still a nice spin.
The abs kick felt like your foot bounced off Uke, it wasn't solid.
The next few kicks were great, they flowed with eachother.
The handspring off the ground broke the flow, I would have tried to do a corkscrew.
The pose was something new, I liked it.

It's been a while :v

It had a nice opener.
The chest boom was pretty solid.
The skeet was good, but why not destroy the crotch? I'm sure you can do it from there.

Thanks for the cncs c:
And made a new replay earlier

I liked the opener somehow.
The split was pretty sweet but I usually prefer lumbar/abs splits.
The chest boom was pretty cool, even though it wasn't that impressive.
The pec punch was alright, nothing too special.
The skeet was short range, but it was pretty fast.