This has quite a lot of potential.

The main area I would suggest fixing is the landing after the fulltwist (Or whatever the spinny thing is, I forget), but in order to fix the landing, you might need to land with your knees slightly contracted, but with your feet on the floor to create extra upward momentum, thus making the landing of the fulltwist easier (Well, it should do)


The fulltwist itself is great, so just try and replicate it as best as possible.

Oh, and you have a few issues with flow here and there, but you should get better in time.

One more thing... If you find my criticism kind of odd to understand, it's my fault. I can't explain things well, but pm me if you want to ask any questions about the criticism and/or if you want me to look at an edit of the replay or something (Or just ask someone who understands more about tricking than me, because I don't really do much of that kind of thing on this game).

Thank you. I understand a bit about the landing, so I might edit that.

Edit! I've managed to get a boom and a skeet.
I'm rather proud of it, so... that's what I named it.

My tori falling IS THE POSE!!!!
No, but in all seriousness I felt that it didn't really need a pose,
though I'm sure I could make one if I tried.
Thanks for your input.

I liked how everything flowed together nicely.
The first kick was nice, but a bit too close, imo.
The second kick was good, but a bit stiff, and a bit too close, again.
The skeet was cool.
The end could've been better with a pose.

Thank you! finally!
Anyway yeah sure I'll do that.

Time to lay down mah CnC, thug style holmes.

Aight, check it.
Dat replay was tight yo, but it lacked emotion and excitement, ya dig?

Edit it some more and DM those legs or at least the chest. It feels unfinished to me. Other than that, great job son. You make an old man like me proud (lol idk wat the fak im talking about anymore).

8/10. Keep it up.

lol Tamakuu, you're such a loser. No but srsly, new replay.
This is the first replay that I actually forced myself today, rather
than screwing around and creating a random ass opener.

Now that was nice. I really liked that.

Your opening twist was nice, and your follow up twist was just as nice, nearly beautiful (lol'd nearly is in your name). The twist for the upward twist kick looked nice, but the landing looked sketchy. Recently, I've been seeing landings that just don't look right to me. Like they just don't care about it. You should relax all or at least relax your hips and legs to act as a spring to catch all of that momentum like a shock absorber. Other than that, great replay. Tricking is naturally in you.

Thanks TamaKuu.
Here's some skeet practice, will probably edit later
Into a madman.