opener weirded me out. i'd have rather seen a split than a hip & glute dm, but you made up for it with the 2nd kick. the arm and the left leg looked weird in the kick though. you grabbed before the boomsmash (idk what to call it). going into the pose looked pretty funny, and pose itself too (dat balance).

It's a nice replay but still rough around the edges.

New one with a fairly bad manip. ;p

Really Nice replay Irrita,

The second kick in which the foot slid up the body didn't look too good but as it went on it got much better and the ending was awesome :P

8/10

Here's a collab that me and nagato are doing. I'm posting it here just to get it to him. Not really expecting cnc.

Who needs names
I liked the boom (second hit) very much
Didn't like how you kept knees extended all the time
Kicks look a bit twitchy, try relaxing knees for a few frames to make it smoother
Overall, pretty cute

The lucky ones
Liked the lift, the spin at the end and the transition to the pose
Again, the hits look a bit twitchy
There were few poses I wouldn't suggest to use in a replay, i.e. @456
And again, knees shouldn't be fully extended/contracted all the time, elbows too I guess.

EDIT:

New one.

Self damage was kinda pointless, generic opener
first hit (the lfit) looks a bit like an unsuccessful attemp to dm
liked the next two hits, though it feels like you'd rather extend the elbow after the hit rather than contracting. But its k, seems pretty hard to do smoothly (tried couple times)
next hit looks a bit pointless. maybe not, but i do prefer booms/2dm hits over 1 dm ones.
liked the transition to the actual pose and the pose as it is. Should've kept it for a little more, it always seems unfinished to me when you can see tori falling at the end.
Enjoyed watching it, n1

Thank you.

Bumpity

Movement was alright, though I wished you started further away from Uke. This kinda restricted stuff

Split was great, good job on the core

Getting Uke's lumbar was boring, though you could possibly go for a skeetcap if you edited it. You have self-damage on, anyways

Thank you. I was gonna try for a skeet cap but it just wasn't working. Lol